Wednesday, December 17, 2014

sample midterm essay






Introduction

    Journalism involves gathering, writing and reporting news, and broadly it includes the process of editing and presenting the news articles. Journalism applies to various media such as magazines, newspapers, radio, television, and websites. 
In journalism, the Five W’s + H are who, what, when, where, why and how. These terms are fundamental to information-gathering in journalism. It is a formula for getting the “full” story on something. A good piece of journalism should contain all of this information.  
    Page 46 in the 2016 Hillwood High School yearbook is (or is not) an example of good journalism.

Now you should explain why or why not, incorporating the 5W's and H in your persuasive essay. 

   The page shows photographs of the four Sophomore Class Officers for the 2015-2016 school year. The viewer knows "who" they are, because each officer's name is placed beneath his or her photo."What" also has a limited explanation since the office each student holds is shown beneath the photo.
   The remaining 5W's+H, When, Where, Why and How are not included, however.

Elaborate on the remaining 5W's+H, commenting on how they might have been incorporated.


Wednesday, December 3, 2014

december 8

Proof names correctly, please!!!!!!!!!!
Correct Senior names today.

Pages due Friday
Jar
Casey 
Anna
Brooks_student life_5-8 freshman faces
Austin_student life
Kenan 
James_127_I can help you fewer photos on layout
Dylan_2 pages?
Lenn and Gracen_need layout
Jackie 142 if possible
Brianna 143 if possible


Midterm

Sunday, November 9, 2014

november 10_14

Check out and return cameras correctly.

Missing a black Canon???????

One photo box for officer pages are on layouts. See me if you need to resize. Copy this for the rest of the photo boxes for this layout.

Senior officer photos are uploaded

Saturday, November 1, 2014

nov 3-7


Check for duplicate photos. We have lots of duplicates. The person who took the photo has rights to use it if it is on 2 pages. 


Be back at 1:50
Use your pass wisely. 


Bennett_Math club names

Dance Ensemble. Add names

Freshman football photos on the page layout. Just add names from the coaches roster. 

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

superlatives


Tuesday, October 21, 2014

oct 29

Check for duplicate photos. The person who took the photo has rights to use it if it is on 2 pages. 


Be back at 1:50
Use your pass wisely. 


Bennett_Math club photos.
Set next date for photos.


Dance Ensemble. Add names


I have Prosart photos on the page layout. Just add names

I have Rock Band photos on the page layout. Just add names from Mr. Rains's rosters

I have SkillsUSA photos on the page layout. I will add names.

Freshman football photos on the page layout. Just add names from the coaches roster. 




Do you know your assignments and due dates?

Your page is totally your responsibility. You need photos and words for your page. You have to get them and put them on your page by your deadline. 

Your grade for 2nd 9 weeks could be 50. That's my fault, editors' fault, but really your fault. If you can't meet your deadlines, maybe you should be in another class.


Today.......
Editors will guide.........

1. Go to your assigned pages
2. When are they due?
3. Look at your layouts. 
    • What do you need?
    • Do you have it?
    • If not, get it
    • If you need names for pages, especially sports, get them
4. What do you type on your pages....for example, a page that says "headline". We are Hillwood has already been used.
5. Do not change your layouts without approval.
6. Some photos are too dark. Lighten them.

We do not want yearbook staff members on very many pages.


Get your job done, even if it means coming in after school, or on a Saturday. See if you can get out of classes to come here to work on yearbook pages.
You can even do your pages at home!!!!!!! 





Tuesday, October 14, 2014

october 15-17

Today, Oct 17:

What do you need?

Bennett_Math club photos. Oct. 22. Help?

Uploading photos into the correct location

Crop photos. A photo of a freshman in Ms. Taylor's art class can show artist at work, or just a face.



Be back at 1:50
Use your pass wisely. I've had some complaints.

Do you know your assignments and due dates?

Your page is totally your responsibility. You need photos and words for your page. You have to get them and put them on your page by your deadline. 


1. Candids_checkout camera in morning and shoot during day. Bring back at end of day.


2.There are lots of deadlines now. Be sure you are ready. Missed deadlines will really impact your grade. A deadline counts 10 times. You will get a 50 for each school day you miss your deadline.

3. Get your job done, even if it means coming in after school, over fall break, or on a Saturday.
You can even do your pages at home !!!!!!!!!!!

Also..............

I have lots of photos. Here is how you will get them. Madison and Kenan, tell us.

New pages
Dance Ensemble_1 page, organization or sport layout. Group photo on October 22 during 2A. Candids on October 24 during 2A. Who will photograph?

Dance recital

Selfies?

Old pages

  • Golf and Cross Country on one page together
  • Freshman Football_one page action only
  • Freshman Cheerleaders ???????
  • Varsity Cheerleaders_I will take this photo on November 5. Do all other photos now.
  • Football action (also for sports candids)_Joe Burlingame. Get a flash drive or external hard drive from me.
  • Peace signs or other hand signs_be sure it's a peace sign.......sideways is not a peace sign. Nothing that could POSSIBLY be interpreted as a "gang" sign. 
  • We do not want yearbook staff members on very many pages

Captions_add them to your pages. Put people's names by the photos on the pages.




Do Today

  • Check your camera battery today. If it needs to be recharged, do it.
  • Look at your layouts. 
    • What do you need?
    • Do you have it?
    • If not, get it. 
  • If you need names for pages, especially sports, how will you get that?
  • Email me if you need photos.stephen.campbell@mnps.org .If you need 3 candids, tell me you need 3 candids. Tell me specifically what you need. If I have them, I will get them for you over the fall break.
Thank you, Jackie

Saturday, September 13, 2014

september 29-oct 3_2014

Be back at 1:50

Do you know your assignments and due dates?

Your page is totally your responsibility. You need photos and words for your page. You have to get them and put them on your page by your deadline. 

You are the best and brightest. Now prove it: 

1. Candids_checkout camera in morning and shoot during day. Bring back at end of day.


2.There will be lots of deadlines after fall break. Be sure you are ready. Missed deadlines will really impact your grade.

3. Get your job done, even if it means coming in after school, over fall break, or on a Saturday.

Also..............
  • have cross country team shot
  • I have band candids, cheerleader candids, and random candids from the auditorium today
  • I have football team photo
  • I will take freshman football and cross country action today, I hope. Did not happen.



Do Today

  • Check your camera battery today. If it needs to be recharged, tell me.
  • Open your layouts. Let's look at football.
  • What do you need?
  • Do you have it?
  • If not, get it. If you need the names of all the players, how will you get that?
  • Email me if you need photos. stephen.campbell@mnps.org .If you need 3 candids, tell me you need 3 candids. Tell me specifically what you need. If I have them, I will get them for you over the fall break.



Tuesday, September 2, 2014


sept 2-5

I'm shooting Football Team today. I need a Nikon after the pep rally.

Yearbook staff passes for tonight. Get them from me.

Pep rally shots

Madison
Can we upload photos to eDesign?
Are page layouts ready?

Be back at 1:50

Priorities
Yearbook should be priority #1 during this class.

Casey and Anna last Friday. Mr. Molesworth had contacted me earlier. 

Photos
Load your good photos on your desktop, for a grade, no later than Tuesday, September 9

Make folders within folders....candids, school life, sports, etc. 

Delete bad photos from the SD cards.

Fall sports photos, team/group and candids, need to be finished by September 15.

Monday, September 8, 2014

sept 8-12

The white Nikons cost $500.00. Protect your cameras. Keep the strap around your neck. Do not allow other students to handle our cameras. 

Be back at 1:50

Do you know your assignments and due dates?

Deadline grade:
Fall sports photos, team/group and candids, need to be finished by September 15, except for varsity football. Cross country, golf, etc.

Photos I have: 
some freshman in art class
volleyball
freshman football action

Today

Tell us what photos you have in a folder or on an SD card

Tell us what photos you need

Your photos are excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!




Photos
Load your good photos on your desktop, for a grade, no later than Tuesday, September 9

Make folders within folders....candids, school life, sports, etc. 

Delete bad photos from the SD cards.



Tuesday, September 2, 2014

sept 2-5

I'm shooting Football Team today. I need a Nikon after the pep rally.

Yearbook staff passes for tonight. Get them from me.

Pep rally shots

Madison
Can we upload photos to eDesign?
Are page layouts ready?

Be back at 1:50

Priorities
Yearbook should be priority #1 during this class.

Casey and Anna last Friday. Mr. Molesworth had contacted me earlier. 

Photos
Load your good photos on your desktop, for a grade, no later than Tuesday, September 9

Make folders within folders....candids, school life, sports, etc. 

Delete bad photos from the SD cards.

Fall sports photos, team/group and candids, need to be finished by September 15.






Friday, August 15, 2014

august 18-22

Back at 1:50. Everybody. Every class.

Do not become complacent. 

SD cards and Nikons. See me for your shots.

Folders and assignment sheet. 

Madison. Ladder diagram.

Nov 5 _ sports team photos.........except football

Put SD card in cameras


Your SD card should be 
1. in the camera
2. in a computer or card reader for uploading, or 
3. in an envelope in the file cabinet
Each SD  card belongs to a specific camera. 

Shoot photos & get names, especially of people you do not know. 

ACT words and journalism
http://hillwoodyearbook.blogspot.com/2011/10/act-words-assignment.html

Wednesday, July 9, 2014

yearbook syllabus

Yearbook 1415 syllabus

Hillwood High School

Instructor: Steve Campbell
Phone: 615-353-2025
E-mail: stephen.campbell@mnps.org
Website: hillwoodyearbook.blogspot.com

Course Description:
This course is designed to teach the skills necessary to produce the school yearbook, which offers a complete record of an entire school year.  The year begins by planning the coverage for the school year and generating theme for the book.  Students will become familiar with layout and design techniques, writing and editing copy, picture captions, photojournalism and journalistic writing.



Teaching Methods:
Lectures/Demonstrations/Discussion:  Each class begins with a staff meeting, guided by the teacher and editors. This includes a discussion of the work assigned. You should plan to take careful notes.
Assignments: Individually and in teams, staff members are assigned yearbook pages to produce and proof for errors.
Exams: Two exams will be given.

Grading:
All grades are connected to Journalism Standards (see below)

Weekly grades are given in the following categories:
Time sheets: You will complete and turn in a time sheet documenting what you have done in terms of work for the yearbook. Your individual and group grade will be determined based on your documentation.
25%
Individual work 25%
Group work 25%
ACT words 20%
Literacy 5%

Grading rubric

Grades are connected to the standards below. You will receive at least three grades each week, one individual and one group, based on the following rubric:

4 (100-93) Completes assigned work correctly, on time, and undertakes additional work. Work is documented. Advanced performance of standards.

3 (92-85) Completes assigned work adequately and on time. Proficient performance of standards. 

2 (84-75) Assigned work is completed, and on time, but requires minor corrections. Basic performance of standards.

1 (74 and below) Assigned work is completed after deadlines and/or requires major corrections. Below basic performance of standards.

50 No work completed




Journalism Standards(3008): Grades 9-12
Content Standard:
The student will understand and utilize oral, written, and visual communication.
Goal Statement:
The primary goal of any journalism program should be for students to improve oral and written communication skills. Many high school students seek opportunities to explore career possibilities in the media. Journalism programs should offer students many opportunities to excel in a variety of areas.

Learning Expectations:

Oral
•Demonstrate speaking, listening, and research skills which will facilitate interviewing and other oral communication activities.
•Demonstrate appropriate language skills, demeanor, and attire to cultivate success and good public relations.
•Demonstrate appropriate interviewing techniques.
•Apply terms and expressions common to the industry to speaking, listening, and writing
activities.
 •Apply legal and ethical journalistic standards to all journalism activities.

Written
•Demonstrate appropriate language usage skills and research techniques.
•Demonstrate appropriate journalistic writing style for various media.
•Recognize the difference between fact and opinion and its appropriate use in media production.
•Use computers (if available) to compose, edit, and revise work for publication.
•Write for an intended (prescribed) audience, recognizing the importance of ethics in information
gathering and reporting.
•Demonstrate editing and revision techniques to produce work suitable for publication/
production.

Visual
•Exhibit a working knowledge for roles and procedures of management and production of various media.
•Demonstrate knowledge of business management including advertising, circulation, and/or bookkeeping procedures.
•Understand and utilize standard principles of related areas to enhance visual appeal.
 •Create visual effects by utilizing graphic designs, either technologically generated (if available)
or original work.
•Demonstrate knowledge of layout and design procedures by incorporating consistency of style
using a desktop publishing system (if available), traditional methods, or a combination of both techniques.



Course Outline

First semester:
Yearbook basics
Page layout and design
Yearbook production, proofing and editing


Second semester:
Page layout and design
Yearbook production, proofing and editing
Journalism style and variety