Wednesday, September 29, 2010

October 5

Thank you everybody!

Plan to work on yearbook assignments from this point on.

I'm depending on you to do your job. No one backed up on Friday.

Set up a gmail account & learn to send an attachment.
http://mail.google.com/mail/help/open.html

Senior photos in PhotoTracker.
Password is changed. I messed up again! I will log in from now on. Payton & Liza be sure to log out.
I will checkout on October 14.

PhotoTracker is only for seniors to choose their yearbook photo. No one should be looking at any else's photos.

Turning in pages. Make the folder. Put the jpeg(s) in the folder. Make the InDesign page. Save it into the folder. Place the jpeg(s) in the InDesign layout.

p155_cap & hoodie_redo?
Please watch for this.

Tennis & other photos. Freshman football?

Varsity Football photo. Be sure we use the one that has all the Hume-Fogg players.

Give out underclass photos. Two volunteers. It would be helpful if you are also an office worker. Jasmine and Lauren.
Collect photos from Chihuly trip, outside artwork last Friday, speaker in Ms. Berotti's room.

Confidentiality.

Senior Superlatives.

Log out at the end of class!

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

9_29

Clubs & Organizations

Feel free to back up your own work

Check the senior photos.
How many do we have posted? 89 as of 9_29. Thank you Liza.
Are the poses correct, as in not casual.

Collect photos from Chihuly trip, outside artwork last Friday, speaker in Ms. Berotti's room.

WOW

Saturday, September 25, 2010

9_27

Mention problems and ask for help during our time at the first of class.

Senior names for photos & Senior accomplishments.....another approach....another name for this? I need one or two people to coordinate this.

Teacher information forms and typing in information. I need one or two people.

Pages due. Create a folder. Create an InDesign page and place it in the folder.
These instructions and sports page instructions are on this blog. Can you find the instructions?

Sports pages. What to do is on blog, below.

Someone back up each computer today. There are individual flash drives for this, but it looks like we already need to back up on the external hard drive. I need two people to be responsible for this.

Trash photos that are not ever going to be used.


Sunday, September 19, 2010

sports pages

yearbook sports pages


page #_______ due date:________ your name:______________________


sport:________________________________________________________


Coach(s):_____________________________________________________


to do:


____get schedule


____get rosters


____type copy on pages in computer


____proof everything you type


____get group photo taken


photographer_____________________________________


date & time of photo___________ location of photos______________________


____get candid photos taken


photographer___________________________________________________


date & time of photo_____________________________________________


location of photos_______________________________________________



Saturday, September 18, 2010

september 23 photos

september 23

sports photos


One or two coordinators needed


The photographer will be here around 1:30. Brittney and Susie will help during B8.

Volleyball_2:10 large gym

Cross Country_2:20 field

Girls Soccer_2:30 field

Cheerleading_2:40 field

Golf_3:00 field

Football_3:20 field


Freshman cheerleaders?


Double check to see if it's OK to use gym at 2:10

What time can photographer set up?


Coordinate other team shots in large gym or football field.

Be sure we can use football field.

What time?


If you are doing a sport, I will have order forms for the team and individual photos. Be sure you get those from me and you give them to the coaches by September 22.


I am confirming the schedule with Lifetouch after school today.


I have some sports schedules. You should put those in your folders.

senior portrait selections

One, two, or three needed

Supervise selections on Phototracker

Final checkout of selections on October 14.

Monday, September 13, 2010

9_15 WOW & updates

I have the volleyball schedule & player names
I also have the soccer schedule

Update on underclass photos

Update on September 23


WOW Rewrites

Use the checklists below and or refer to the Persuasion Map links


Persuasive Writing

Checklist



Student Name:_________________________ Academy:____________



I clearly state my position or argument in the introduction.


I begin with a lead/introduction that grabs the reader’s interest.


I give 3 reasons to support my position.


In each body paragraph, I support my position or argument with some of these:


Present interesting facts/statements, relevant information,

facts, expert opinions, statistics, quotes, examples and/or statistics

Tell a story related to my position or argument

Alarm the reader by presenting “what ifs” or questions


I tell the readers everything they need to know to convince them of my position.


I tell things in a logical order that makes sense—I place the most convincing evidence where it best supports my position.


I use words that persuade or convince the reader to think or act a certain way.


I end with a strong conclusion that is interesting, convincing, and suggests action.


I sound knowledgeable and authoritative.





Persuasive Writing

Checklist


Student Name: ______________________________________ Academy:____________


Introduction:

____ I followed the writing prompt directions for writing the persuasive essay.

____ I begin with a lead/introduction that grabs the reader’s interest such as

· Present interesting facts/statement

· Tell a story related to my position or argument


____ I clearly state my position (pro or con) with a thesis statement in the introduction.

____ I transition smoothly and effectively to the reasons.


Body Paragraphs (3):

____ I begin each body paragraph with a transition word and a topic sentence that states a reason that supports my position.

____ I support my reasons with some of these: facts, expert opinions, statistics, quotes, and examples in each body paragraph.

____ I connect each of my reasons with smooth and effective transitions.

____ I state, support and defend my position in the body of the writing.

____ I place the most convincing evidence where it best supports my argument.


Conclusion:

____ I end with a strong conclusion that restates the thesis and my arguments.

____ I appeal to the reader to agree with my stand and I suggest action.





To receive a "4", the paper must have:


1. A clear position statement (1-sentence) in the introduction


2. Three different reasons (each reason written as the topic sentence of each body paragraph (3), supporting examples ( at least 3) for each reason


3. A conclusion paragraph that calls for action.


If a student’s paper does not contain the requirements mentioned above, he/she should not receive a “4”.


To receive a “5”, the student should have all attributes of a “4” paper; in addition, to syntactical variety denoted by well written sentences that vary in structure.


Volume or length of paper does not constitute a score of a “4” or a “5” without the requirements stated above.